posted by Laila K at 10:02
morning hush...this sunday morning i love these words
sorry to be the zinkh in this, but if this poem is meant to be a haiku, you are missing 1 syllable in line 3.
i know :)it was ' and a morning hush', but somehow i like it better this way..
ok i changed it back!
beautiful morning
//(o)(o)\\ boobies
shattoora. your lit teachers of bygone days will be proud.
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morning hush...
this sunday morning i love these words
sorry to be the zinkh in this, but if this poem is meant to be a haiku, you are missing 1 syllable in line 3.
i know :)
it was ' and a morning hush', but somehow i like it better this way..
ok i changed it back!
beautiful morning
//(o)(o)\\ boobies
shattoora. your lit teachers of bygone days will be proud.
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