Saturday, September 8, 2007

ode to a summer day

scars and souvenirs
saffron sun and salty skin
and a morning hush

7 comments:

rouba said...

morning hush...
this sunday morning i love these words

Ibn Bint Jbeil said...

sorry to be the zinkh in this, but if this poem is meant to be a haiku, you are missing 1 syllable in line 3.

Laila K said...

i know :)

it was ' and a morning hush', but somehow i like it better this way..

Laila K said...

ok i changed it back!

ella said...

beautiful morning

Dry Gin Martini said...

//(o)(o)\\ boobies

Ibn Bint Jbeil said...

shattoora. your lit teachers of bygone days will be proud.

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